He’s not so much a protagonist as a punching bag.

Just spent ten minutes or so talking at kniedzw, trying to figure out how to make a certain plot point happen, and at the end of it all I decided the best method is: embarrasssing Galen.

Poor boy. I so terribly mean to him.

ETA: I originally typed “humiliating Galen,” then decided to downgrade it. Now that I’ve written the scene?

I had it right the first time.

Poor boy. I’ll make it up to him in the next couple thousand words.

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