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Book read: La Valencia del XVII, Pablo Cisneros

Last year I stopped posting about what I’d been reading because it abruptly became All Research, All the Time for The Sea Beyond, and I couldn’t talk yet about what Alyc and I were working on. Then I could talk about it, but it didn’t make good fodder for the usual “here’s what I’ve been reading” posts, and I didn’t have the time or energy to work through the backlog to do the kinds of individualized book reports I did back in my Onyx Court days.

But this book gets a report, because this is the first time I’ve read an entire book in a language other than English.

Mind you, I wouldn’t give myself full, unadulterated credit. I did rely on Google Lens to check my comprehension of each paragraph after I’d read it, or to assist with sentences I couldn’t quite make sense of. (Some of which I did in fact read correctly the first time, but what they said was so unexpected, I needed verification.) Machine translation also helped a great deal with the quotations of undiluted seventeenth-century Spanish — though after a while I got better at coping with “hazer” and “dexar” and “avía” and “buelta” — and I flat-out needed it for the untranslated Catalan, from which I can pluck out at most fifty percent of the words via cognates.

Still and all, I read this book. On the basis of three years of Spanish classes from ages thirteen to fifteen, a reading comprehension test in graduate school that I passed with an assist from four years of Latin + watching a bunch of familiar movies with their Spanish subtitles running, and a headfirst dive into a Spanish practice app when this series got officially greenlit. I am stupidly proud of myself for doing as well as I did.

And I’m glad I attempted it! In the grand scheme of things, Cisneros is no Liza Picard; he quotes abundantly from the writings of period travelers and Valencian observers, but he doesn’t seem to have gone digging deeply into other kinds of sources or context that might have fleshed out his description in greater detail. It’s all fine and well to tell me what kinds of development was done around the Palacio Real, but I had to look elsewhere to verify my guess that, in the usual absence of the monarch, that was the residence of the viceroy instead. Cisneros is very obviously writing to an audience of fellow Valencians — there’s a constant evocation of “our city” and “our ancestors” — and his goal is mostly to glorify things about the city that date back to the seventeenth century and to describe things that are no longer there. He does acknowledge some of the less-attractive parts, like the rather dingy houses occupied by non-elites or the truly massive amount of interpersonal violence, but he’s not trying to fully explore daily life back then.

Beggars can’t be choosers, though. There’s an astonishing paucity of books in English about daily life in Golden Age Spain — as in, I’ve found a grand total of two, plus one about sailing with the New World treasure fleets — and even in Spanish, it’s hard to find works that focus on Valencia, which is where a significant part of the story will be set. But for every bit where Cisneros goes into stultifying detail on the Baroque renovations of individual churches (almost all of them late enough to be irrelevant to our series), there’s another bit where he tells me exactly which parts of the river embankment will be under construction when our protagonist arrives there, or how Valencians were required to water the streets in the summer to cool off the city and reduce disease, or what now-vanished traditions represent what they did for fun. (At Carneval, they pelted each other with orange skins filled with such delightful stuffings as bran, fat, and the must left over from wine-making. Apparently injuries were not uncommon: he quotes a poem whose title more or less translates to “From a gentleman to the lady who put his eye out with an orange.”)

So this gave me a decent amount of very useful concrete detail that will help Valencia feel like Valencia, not Generic Early Modern European City. It may have taken me weeks to read its 228 pages, because I could only manage about ten pages a day before my brain shorted out and stopped processing any Spanish at all, but in the long run, it was worth it!

the Onyx Court effect

Around 2019, I realized that my reading had become somewhat sporadic — or rather, that it had been somewhat sporadic for quite some time. And when I considered why, I was able to trace it back to a specific root cause:

The Onyx Court.

When I started writing a historical fantasy series, I dove headfirst into research. And as a result, when it came time to set work aside and do something else, “read more” was not high on my list, even if what I would be reading was fun novels instead of history books. Then I finished the Onyx Court series and continued onward into the Memoirs of Lady Trent, which weren’t so research-intensive, but did involve periodic dips into that mode as I oriented myself in a new region for each book. And I just . . . kind of drifted away from regular reading. Until I noticed the lack and made a conscious decision to go back.

Well, here we are in 2024, I’m writing a historical fantasy series again — and I’ve read almost no novels since March.

I binged a few in July when I was on vacation, so I’m sure the impulse isn’t dead. (It’s only pining for the fjords. (Don’t throw things at me. “Nobody expects the Spanish Inquisition” has been stuck in my head since March.)) Every so often I slip in something along the way, especially light, quick reads — W.E. Johns’ Worrals books have been good for that. But my TBR shelf, which I was making very steady progress through, has completely stalled out.

The good news is, although I think this particular dive may be even deeper than before — driven by the fact that I started with much less of a grounding in the first place — unlike the Onyx Court series, when we’re done drafting the first book, I don’t have to start all over again in a new century for the second. So I anticipate getting back to more normal reading habits early next year.

But man, I miss wanting to read in my spare time.

what I’ve been up to

Some of you may have noticed that I abruptly stopped book-blogging in April. That’s not because I stopped reading anything; rather, it’s that my reading list suddenly looked like this:

The Spanish Inquisition, Joseph Pérez, trans. Janet Lloyd.
Golden Age Spain, H. Kamen.
Secret Science: Spanish Cosmography and the New World, María M. Portuondo.
Honor and Violence in Golden Age Spain, Scott K. Taylor.
Spain: The Centre of the World 1519-1682, Robert Goodwin.
Local Religion in Sixteenth-Century Spain, William A. Christian, Jr.
Imprudent King: A New Life of Philip II, Geoffrey Parker.

. . . and that’s just a sampler. It would have been a giant red flag that I was Up To Something — but I couldn’t yet talk about what.

Today, that changes! I can fiiiiiiiiiiiinally announce that Alyc Helms and I are hard at work on another M.A. Carrick collaboration, a historical fantasy duology called The Sea Beyond. From the formal announcement:

In an alternate Spanish Golden Age, where the map becomes the territory and mapmakers are the architects of reality, the Council of the Sea Beyond has risen to unrivaled power, exploiting the world’s most precious resources for their own gain.

Determined to discover how cosmographers pin down the islands of the Otherworld, Estevan seeks power with the Council of the Sea Beyond – but he risks the exposure of his own secrets, too. For he is a changeling, a faerie masquerading as a mortal. And for a faerie to enter the mortal world like that, a child must go the other way . . .

The Hungry Girl, the nameless human daughter whose place he took, has grown up opposite her “brother.” Lost among the fae and desperate to find some purpose for her existence, she leaps at the chance to help a group of Spanish explorers in the Sea Beyond . . . only to be horrified at the atrocities they commit.

Soon the unlikely siblings will need to overcome their rivalry — because only together can they bring down Spain’s worlds-spanning empire and save the homes they have come to love.

Though you’d be justified in wondering, this is 100% unconnected to the Onyx Court books: same general time period as Midnight Never Come, yes, and with faeries in, but a completely different version of events — starting with the fact that this is an “open” historical fantasy, where everybody knows and has always known about faerie matters (we’ve been having fun working out some alternate Catholic theology around that), instead of a secret history where the public face of events looks like it did in our world.

So that’s what I’ve been up to this year! I’m not going to backtrack to report on all my reading in the last seven months, but if I have the energy, I may return to a practice from my Onyx Court days, making “book reports” on at least a selection of the titles. We’ll see — right now most of my energy is going to, y’know, the book itself. (And things like finishing up Year Eight of the New Worlds Patreon, and and and.) But it’s public and official at last!